Trail of bottle caps and empty rum punch cuos aug 2013

PGW, we need more discription

The air was humid

Like a sauna

The sweat was dripping

down the small of flip's back

into his butt crack

as he stumbled

down the beach

the pearly white

sand parts between

his toes.

We stop for a cold Rum punch

The taste was sweet like pineapple

Shaddowmon screams like a crow

at the bartender

REDSTRIPE

as he bangs his fist

like thor's hammer

what a joy what a joy.

Wow flip you've got a knack,I could actually picture that sweat rolling into your azz(shiver) that's a nice dietary supplement.I may not eat the rest of the day!(grin)

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Originally Posted by flipadelphia26

pgw, we need more discription

the air was humid

like a sauna

the sweat was dripping

down the small of flip's back

into his butt crack

as he stumbled

down the beach

the pearly white

sand parts between

his toes.

We stop for a cold rum punch

the taste was sweet like pineapple

shaddowmon screams like a crow

at the bartender

redstripe

as he bangs his fist

like thor's hammer

what a joy what a joy.

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lmao:)

Flip - perfection.

omg flip you found your f'ing calling!!!

That's funny

Awesome!!!

Flip, great job...but, you forgot the semicolons, ellipses, and commas.

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Originally Posted by flipadelphia26

shaddowmon screams like a crow

at the bartender

redstripe

as he bangs his fist

like thor's hammer

what a joy what a joy.

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lmao!!!!

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Originally Posted by LeslieChow

Hephaestus, goldsmith to Apollo;

Beats out a golden crown;............

Wear your crown in good health, Flip!…

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But only Archimedes knows the weight and purity of the Crown........