We stayed at Negril Escape this past June, and we had exactly the same experience. I won't stay there again until they make some improvements.
The room being repaired in the 3rd and 4th picture of post #8, is that in the Kashbah building? My wife and I had that room reserved, but when we arrived we were given a room in the India building, because the Kashbah building was being gutted. My wife was not pleased. It's a shame, because it could be a beautiful resort.
However, your pictures make the place look AWESOME, justchuck!