I like the airplane and piloting details-- that's the kind of detail that gets me absorbed in a book. It also helped in understanding Danika's character. I felt all the characters were well-developed, which was impressive. That seems to be a difficult thing to do in writing a novel and you nailed it. Of course I loved all the Negril references, but I think the story was great on its own, that was just an added bonus for all of us Negrilaholics. The descriptiveness throughout was very engaging. I won't go into the plot too much, because not everyone has finished reading, but it had me on my toes and made the novel a page-turner. Overall, I think it's great, very impressed!